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Friday, August 6, 2021

Umbrella

Kia ora this is my story about a little video called umbrella it is about a little girl who came  to an orphanage with her mom she bought a box of toys for the kids and she turned around and her umbrella was gone we wrote about a little chunk about it this my story below.

this is the video 



                                                      the yellow umbrella

Early one drizzly morning the creaky old dark door to Miss Elem’s home for lost and scared children opened wide. The little girl with the glistening bright yellow umbrella, cautiously entered the orphanage before finding a home for her umbrella. Not wanting to be seen, Boris zoomed and quickly lashed his head around the door frame so that he was hidden from sight. Standing off to the side the girl was observing the cheerful and pleasant scene as the children examined the box for hidden treasure. The girl gave a sinister smile as she watched the young boy speeding around the room like an eagle. Her smile slowly faded away as she looked back to the umbrella stand All she saw were puddles and her sad face in them. Her special umbrella was gone.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Rodas,

    I really enjoyed reading your story about the yellow umbrella. Your description of it, made it easy for me to imagine what it was like. Well done.
    I wonder what happened to the umbrella? Do you know?

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